“That”
‘That’ can be a pronoun, as in ‘that is a good idea.’ ‘That’ can be a determiner, as in ‘he lived in Chicago at that time.’ ‘That’ can be an adverb, as in ‘I would not go that far.’ ‘That’ can be a conjunction, as in ‘she said that she was satisfied.’ That’s a lot of uses for a little four letter word. In working on the writing style for the manuscript for my third novel I noticed a lot of “that’s”. It was disturbing. In almost every case “that” added nothing to the sentence and because there were so many of them, it was distracting. I decided to weed out every unnecessary “that”, which meant about 98% of them. In the first 20 pages of my manuscript I found more than 30 “that’s” Can you believe it? This has been a self-revelation, a disturbing one. I am committed to search and destroy every “that” in my manuscript no matter how long it takes. Unfortunately, I don’t have any explanation for my infatuation with “that”. It happens, I guess, it sneaks up on a writer without you taking notice. My advice, do a search of common words in your writing. You too may discover you have that problem.
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5/31/2017 12:06:23 pm
I have a similar problem with 'that,' and turf it out whenever I can. Many people write "the man that..." when it should be "the man WHO." 'That' is used for inanimate objects, like "the building that..." Although I'm a very mature writer I still love learning. The more you learn though, the more you realise you don't know...Best wishes. Joy
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